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Round Two

Author - Penmom | Genre - Humor | Genre - Romance | Main Story | R | Rating - PG-13
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Round Two

By Penmom

Rating PG-13
Disclaimer: Characters aren’t mine etc...
Authors notes: I was wondering what the Neuropressure after “Harbinger” would hold here’s my take on the verbal exchange.

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(Picture our favorite couple kneeling, facing each other - essentially in the same posture as their conversation in Harbinger.)

”I told Amanda ta' cool it some. I mean it’s not like we're not gonna be friends---.”

”I have no need to hear of your --- association---with Corporal. Cole.”

”Your voice is gettin' tense again and your muscles are tensin' up too.”

He can't help but twist the knife a little deeper. Leaning in closer, he speaks softly into her ear.

”Ya' wouldn't be gettin' so tense if ya' weren't jealous.”

Her head turns bringing her mouth within an inch or two of his own. She meets his gaze with the challenge of a single arched brow.

When she answers, her voice seems huskier. “To assume that I am jealous ….” She says the word as if the word and the feeling it represents are foreign to her. “Would be to assume that your actions somehow impact me.”

His eyes twinkle in response to the exchange so reminiscent of their earlier interaction. If she wants to play - he's game.

He maintains eye contact although his eyes take on a slumberous quality. “If I recall correctly, my actions seemed ta' impact ya' pretty much.”

”As I recall, I explained to you that I was simply --- appeasing my curiosity.”

”And was it? --- appeased that is?” He punctuates his question by inclining his head so that their foreheads touch.

With the contact, he catches a slight shift in her expression. “On the contrary, our --- contact --- yielded quite a few questions that may require further --- experimentation.”

She raises her own forehead away from his but tilts her head so that her lips are only a slight breath away from his own by the time she finishes speaking.

"So this ahh --- experimentation --- is this with the population at large or do you have somethin' more specific in mind?”

"I am thinking that it would be far more prudent to pursue my --- experimentation --- with a specific, discreet, individual given my responsibilities as an officer."

”Only seems logical, ya wouldn’t want to give folks the wrong impression.”

For a moment their lips come together.

”So, ya got any candidates? I mean as far as your experimentin' goes?”

”As a matter of fact, I do.”

Their lips meet again, this time with a little more pressure.

”Anybody, I know?” He asks playfully pulling away from her mouth.

She responds by catching his lower lip firmly between her teeth for a long moment before releasing him. He groans before he can help himself.

”I have one logical --- candidate --- as you say.” Her hands release his neck as her arms twine around his neck.

Tiring of their word play, Trip allows himself to fall backward onto the pillows arranged on her floor, pulling her with him as he goes before rolling her beneath him. He manages one more remark, "That's one lucky fella..."

The End

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A whole mess of folks have made comments

I read this story when it was first posted on FanFiction.net. I was so happy to see it posted here I read it again and I still love it. Keep up the good work Penmom.

Oh, I love this story!!

Especially:

"So this ahh --- experimentation --- is this with the population at large or do you have somethin' more specific in mind?”
"I am thinking that it would be far more prudent to pursue my --- experimentation --- with a specific, discreet, individual given my responsibilities as an officer."
”Only seems logical, ya wouldn’t want to give folks the wrong impression.”

:-)))))) Trip and logic... ah, yes! :-)))))

I liked this, very light and playful. What a lucky T'Pol! Ali D :~)

Fantasic...................more please, I love this fic!, very well told, well done!

The End?!? I was just getting into it!!! LOL Nevertheless it is good. Good job! :)

Nice, very nice. I enjoyed this.

Hey! What Violin 2118 said! You aren't ending it here are you! It was getting good! I loved it, very cute!

yes, very cute, very "logical" and very Trip-like. You have captured their character well.

A nice little story.

A nice little story indeed. I wonder what would happen if if Cole managed to figure out the nature of T'Pol's sexual blitzkrieg on the good commander and decided not to take it lying down?

just two sweeties , great !